Up up and away! by SindrakeSmokeRings (critique requested)

Up up and away! (critique requested)

SindrakeSmokeRings

7 March 2016 at 21:06:26 MST

This is my new icon... keep the needles away from me!

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    Pokes with needle

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      Nooooo!!!! pop!

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        Here's my critique:
        Okay, it's good and i like it. But you should add a shading effect to it, so the GIF will be more cooler. The vision is good, I can see it cleary. You might also want to put your signature somewhere for copyright.

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          Well I just did this in an afternoon. I thought about adding some shadow to it but got lazy and just animated it and put it as my icon. Still, goofy lookin none the less! Thank ya though!

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            You're welcome! BTW I'm making my comic soon! ^^

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              Ooooh snap! Im looking forward to it!

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                It's called Pokemon: THE TRIBE CHALLENGE. It's about a bunch of tribes(4 per team). Is trying to hide and fight the others. Sort of like Hunger Games. My tribe is named: The-Peace-Pokemon-Tribe. This comic will have 1-150 pages. Pretty long huh? The characters are: Davene Grovyle(Leader), Matt(or Matthew)Marshtomp, Christa Squirtle,Lukeo(or Luke)Combusken, Craig Krokorock(The game leader), Draco Charmander(a player), Ivan Bulbasaur(Draco's partner), Watson Dewott(Draco's other partner), and Rodrigo Charmander(Draco's last partner, but a bigger Charmander than Draco). Any questions dude…?

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                Plz look on your shouts