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deer weasyl... by sayum (critique requested)

deer weasyl... (critique requested)

sayum

I've been gone so long.
Feeling pretty depressed about my art. Branching out to see if that would help.
So here, have some deer, weasyl.
Constructive criticism welcome.

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Visual / Sketch

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    Gone long? How long? I was away for over 2 1/2 years, and got lucky I could come back with the promise I could be a better person here (long story). :U

    Anyways, still better art than I could do. I know it's kinda hard to tell 'cause I deleted everything in my gallery (long story short: I was a Pokemon fan artist, Nintendo went berserk and started attacking fan art, and although I didn't get hit with any complaints I decided I'm done with Nintendo so I deleted everything).

    Then again, I always hated my own work, and it's likely I always will. XP Being one of 4 students who got an award for their work when I graduated high school 2 years back still hasn't changed much. :B

    ...What? Oh! My feedback- well, here it is: You do a good job constructing the three-dimensional form of your subject. I'm struggling with that currently, as I mostly have used highly unorthodox methods of getting from sketch to finished piece (though I've been told I'm damn good with fine details and other frills), so I could learn a thing or two from you. :P However, I'd suggest adding more "roughness" to the antlers; as in, less consistent curvature and adding more "blockiness" in some places- but that's just my view on the piece's aesthetics; 'cause I prefer a more dramatic look. What type of look are you going for?

    (And sorry if you get this "late;" I mainly use Linux, so Weasyl picks up my system clock as just UTC- and while it is, the timezone is EDT, but it doesn't pick that up somehow.)