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-- by Sarrukh (critique requested)

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Sarrukh

Another piece from today, in liquid ink. Trying my hand at a more abstracted expression.

The paper bent from the moisture in these, dunno if there was really anything I could about it.

I'd appreciate critique on both of these, as it is a medium im very inexperienced in, but highly intrigued by.

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    What I like about this one is that you mixed drier and wet inking. This sgives some nice contrast and gradients.

    I am not sure about the composition... I'm not good with abstract stuff. It seems a bit bottom heavy to me, though.

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      Thank you! And aye, might be a bit bottom heavy. Im not too good with abstract stuff either, thats why I ask! :) Oh and the dry inking here is actually done with a twig! x)

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        A twig? Awesome.

        I got some nice lines by cutting a a quill out of a chicken feather myself. You might triy that, if you get your hands on a feather that is big enough.