I feel the tent should be more in shadow (since it's a night scene) unless there is another light-source so that it shouldn't be as deeply shadowed. If so there should be some indication of one somehow. (even the lighting on the ground show that the light is on the other side and leads one to believe the moon is the only light) It's very well drawn, just a bit .. bright for a night setting.

Great point, thank you. This is actually an attempt to smush two drawings together, because I wasn't liking each one individually. I should have focused on the tent after I dropped in in.