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Angel Wings by Riley Vakranov (critique requested)

Angel Wings

Angel Wings

I am a body that jumps and drop-kicks

And I always will be

My pockets are full of knives and guitar picks

And they always will be

The summer is hot and sweet-smellin

And it always will be

This old Blazer was never worth sellin

And it never will be

Your broken wings, now mended, were severed

So I took you in and made you all better

I'll be sure to pluck all the right feathers

There, now don't you feel better?

~

Angel Wings (critique requested)

Riley Vakranov

This was a poem from my 2nd book, "Holding On". I wrote this a while back, and it still seems like a decent poem.

Pic was drawn by Tuna on FA

http://www.furaffinity.net/user/tunasandwich

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