For critique, maybe using colors to shade instead of the same but only darker or lighter of the tone you want to shade. Blues, purples, or darker cooler colors work for shading. While warmer ones such as yellow or orange, can help you out in making the picture more lively.
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For critique, maybe using colors to shade instead of the same but only darker or lighter of the tone you want to shade. Blues, purples, or darker cooler colors work for shading. While warmer ones such as yellow or orange, can help you out in making the picture more lively.