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Don't Tell Me How To Feel by QueenDanny (critique requested)

Don't Tell Me How To Feel (critique requested)

QueenDanny

CAIN: Adolf, I know it's hard, But you must be brave.
She's Never coming back.

ADOLF: Don't tell me how to feel

According to the Information on his Bio Adolf was super attached to his mother
but he was also afraid of death

This was a Alternate universe me & a friend on discord were discussing. for like a while
What If Chilla died from an illness. what would become of her favorite son/child.?
& How Adolf would handle loosing his mother. The only parent to support his dreams & goals.
Now being left under the care of his Neglectful & Narcissistic father whom never showed
much compassion or interest toward his Disabled son since he got sick with Polio..

The young Adolf was a sickly child & his mother Chilla Constantly fretted over him.
His father on the other hand had little to no interest in bearing children & so left all those responsibilities
to his wife Chilla.Cain was a very strict father & Husband, & would become angry very regularly often taking his anger out on his Jewish Children.

Adolf was the oldest son & would quickly become the target for his Hostile & volatile Father.
Because of this the relationship between Adolf & his father would deteriorate dramatically .
Adolf Adored his mother but seriously resented his father.

Cain had ambitions for his son to follow him into Dictatorship.
But Adolf was set on a path of always doing the opposite of many of his father's expectations.
This would enrage his father even further, & resulted into trying to Browbeat Adolf into compliance.
This simply had the affect of strengthening Adolf's rebellion against him.

But now left without his Mother's affection & influence.
Would Adolf Abandoned his dream of being an artists & inventor, ?
or stray away from his mothers Jewish teachings.. As it reminded Adolf too much of his mother.
Maybe Adolf would run away from home to get away from his dad to pursue his dreams,
in order to proud his mother or would he be left to be influenced by his fathers Political Occupation that Adolf resented greatly in which Cain had intentionally Planned for his son.

Or maybe Adolf would go the way of Pyro. Maybe Adolf would be led astray by the same tactics ( that tricked Pyro)
in hopes of trying to bring his mother back from death.

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