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Looking Glass Lyrics by Perfect$tar-Astel<3 (critique requested)

VERSE 1:  
        These memories inside my head, 
    Preventing me to think ahead. 
    Always say and Never Do
    What has my life come to?


CHORUS: 
Looking through the looking glass, 
   Sometimes things just need a chance. 
   Looking through the looking glass, 
   We just need the pass. 
   Stories shared from long ago
   Stories shared to the Young and Old


VERSE 2: 
Struggling with mom and dad 
   No one’s giving me a chance
   All the stories from before 
    From the day that I was born.
   

CHORUS: 
Looking through the looking glass, 
   Sometimes things just need a chance. 
   Looking through the looking glass, 
   We just need the pass. 
   Hidden stories of the New. 
   Hidden stories from the Truth.


BRIDGE: 
 I have to shine and take what is mine, 
 Don’t have to follow any rules, just to get to you. 
 Just to get to you. I need to get to you… 


CHORUS: 
Looking through the looking glass, 
 Sometimes things just need a chance. 
 Looking through the looking glass, 
 We just need the pass. 
 We just need the pass. 
We just need the pass. 
 I’m searching through the looking glass. 

Looking Glass Lyrics (critique requested)

Perfect$tar-Astel<3

This is something I had written when I was going through a difficult time. I loved the melody I had come up with; sometimes things that happen in my life make me feel the way I was when I had written this song. I just sing it and I can focus on whatever needs to get down; eventually everyone around me will learn the hard way that I will not stand for their bullying and put downs.

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