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Silver's thinking and watches the moonlight.
I like the shades here^-^
And Mobius has 4 Moons^^ but 2 are visible here*-*
Silver is MINE!
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Thank you for the critique <3
Yeah, I really know about these faults XD this pic is more than 3 years old, and meanwhile (only since around one year or so) I try to concetrate on the body more I was too lazy before XD)! The only thing, that will never change is the way I draw the ears, since I like them like this, and most of my characters have (let's say) 'hanging ears' since it looks less cute XDD and they would all look weird to me if I'd change the ears. Not like them anymore, y'know? Oh and the nose curve just became a little less sharp^^
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Overall this is a beautiful piece, the shading and highlighting are done very well. However, anatomy wise there are several things that caught my eye...
First thing I noticed was the head shape. I don't know if it's because he's an anthro, but either way the curve of the nose is pretty sharp.
Second thing is the ears, they're a little too low. Try imagining what he would look like without his hair..his ears seem (to me) like they would be attached to his jaw or neck.
Then the neck itself is a bit too thin in relation to the stature of the rest of the body; you could fix this perhaps by starting the line of his neck around the strand of hair visible under his chin, moving into the neck and then to the muscle of his shoulders.
And the last thing I noticed was the tail. Nothing big, but just fixing the position, maybe first showing it beneath his butt or behind his thigh. Right now to me the tail appears to be coming from his hip.
Those are the only things that stood out to me. The creasing in the clothes looks right and the overlap of the arms doesn't feel stiff or off. I really do like it and I hope this helps. c: