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Lookout by oddeofreq (critique requested)

Lookout! There's a bird!

It's eyes watching me.

Got to run! Got to climb! Got to hide!

Is that a walnut?

Lookout! Its a human!

He's gonna get me

Got to run! Got to climb! Got to hide!

Is that a grilled cheese?

Lookout! Its a cat!

RUN RUN RUN!

Not working!

Is that a car?

RUN RUN RUN!

BAM!

Sorry Kitty.

You're supposed to look before crossing.

Lookout (critique requested)

oddeofreq

Squirrel outwits cat.

I know its not as good as my last one but i hope you like it the same.

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