One soul - wip 2 by Mazz

One soul - wip 2

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One soul - wip 2

Mazz

April 3, 2014 at 23:16:31 UTC

Another Wip, fixed some mistakes, feel free to continue critique if you'd like.

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Views:: 181
Comments:: 8
Favorites:: 2
Rating:: General
Category:: Visual / Traditional

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LarkspurDragon on April 4, 2014 at 00:10:55 UTC

This looks great! His muzzle looks a bit off, but I don't know how it would be fixed.
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  Mazz on April 4, 2014 at 02:36:41 UTC
  
  F5 I fixed it.
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SleepyMonster on April 4, 2014 at 00:31:57 UTC

This is beautiful! I really love what you have done so far!

The only thing that I would fix is his muzzle. The top of the muzzle should be straight and nose should have kind of a point. Also the mouth line curves up slightly. Here's an example picture: http://wwwdelivery.superstock.com/WI/223/4070/PreviewComp/SuperStock_4070-1303.jpg
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  Mazz on April 4, 2014 at 02:37:21 UTC
  
  I just resubmitted an updated file and fixed the muzzle a little but didn't change the mouth line yet. Thank you
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    SleepyMonster on April 4, 2014 at 15:51:37 UTC
    
    No problem, glad I could help! <3
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LadyObsidian on April 4, 2014 at 01:42:33 UTC

Wow, I can feel the love and security in this piece. <3
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  Mazz on April 4, 2014 at 02:37:33 UTC
  
  Thank you. <3
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  Mazz on April 4, 2014 at 02:40:52 UTC
  
  If you f5 you can see the picture with the fixed Muzzle