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Wysteria Kindred Owl Harpy Undertale Oc by MadameButler (critique requested)

Wysteria Kindred Owl Harpy Undertale Oc (critique requested)

MadameButler

First Name: Wysteria

Last Name: Kindred

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Orientation: Gay

Personality: Balanced Tempered,Cocky,Sadistic During fight's or when he's angry

Monster: Nightkin Owl Harpy

Occupation: Butler of Dream's and Nightmare's

Magic: Dream and Nightmare Based/Manipulation,Shadow Manipulation,Soul Read

Weapon's: A bladed pocket watch chain whip, A Clock hand sword.


Shadow Clock hand spear's: Projectile/ Main Range Attack's

Night's Cloak: Allow's him to hide in the shadow's and shadow's of other's and thing's

Sleep Kiss: He can blow sleep dust or powder in his appointnent's face which make's them drousey temporarily for a while not long though

Shadow Puppet: Allow's him to use shadow puppet string's to attach to his appoinent's shadow to control them (They are dodgeable though)

Shadow's Will: Allow's him to control the shape of shadow's as weapon's
(Example: He'd be able to turn a shadow or shadow's into spike's as they rose up to attack and make the shadow's turn into arm's and handed tendril's but they are avoidable)

Mind Trick: It allow's him to trick his appoinnent's using a eye's they would appear on his hand's as it flashe's at his target the appoinnent would be tricked into thinking one attack would be coming his way when really it would be a false attack as the real one would appear and hit them (it can be dodgeable) and it would trick the appoinnent into thinking wysteria would be in one spot when it was a false one (it can be avoidable).

Nightmare: Kinda like "mind trick" This one allow's wysteria to Bring about his appoinnent's fear or fear's to stun them for a short while
it can be activated just like "Mind Trick" with the eye flash.

Soul read: it allow's him to read a dreamer's soul to judge if it"s tainted or pure


Weakness: Hitting the Eye's on the palm of his hand's.

Like's: Grillby,Handling Dream's and nightmare's,His little brother Eskel,Tea (will add more)

Dislike's: Seeing his brother get hurt,tainted soul's.


Pacifist Run: He would use Only 3 Of his magic attack's As the battle area would be a calm beautiful dream and the choice's to pass him would be

  1. Story tell: You'de tell Wysteria a story and he'd tell you one back if you keep choosing this one it'll get you closer to the end of the battle as he'd tell you about his past.

  2. Dance: You'de ask if he'd like to dance and you both would ballroom or ballaei Dance.

3.Ask for tea: If you choose this little A tea pot would appear above and pour tea drop's and they would be green indicating it's to restore health but you'de have to be quick to catch as many as you need.



Genocide Run: In this run he'd use his weapon's and his magic attack's as a sadistic smile would appear and the battle setting would turn into a nightmare realm. You'de need to hit the eye's on his hand's when there open for that's where two part's of his soul remain's.


Dream: This one allow's Wysteria to see you're dream allowing the the end of the battle to be near

Backstory: Once a owl constilation and when the full moon was above, Two star shard's fell from the sky and landed into the dust of two owl monster's that died within the war as it the shard's fell into the dust the energy from the shard's and the dust from the soul's twind and created Wysteria and Eskel Wysteria was the eldest since his shard had fallen first as Eskel was the younger one as his fell second.

The two were but only little still and exploring the world as they explored the human world as it was where the previouse owl monster's dust was spilled in the war, They tried to fly they did succed but had trouble still they would venture only at night for it was when human's where asleep and unaware of the two owl harpy's though couriose Eskel was he stumbled into the home of a human's as he fell through the chimney Wysteria had followed to make sure if Eskel was Alright. Thankfully he was though both were covered in ash from the dead wood that was placed earlier.

The two youngling's looked around the house as they ventured upstair's and saw the human was asleep Eskel ever more ponderouse, Walked up to the human and observed the strange being that was there, As he placed his hand on the human's head a purple gloe appeared as the human clenched his bed and shaked as the human mumbled as if he was in fear as Wysteria noticed this he walked into the room and did the same as a blue glow appeared as the human calmed and smiled in his slumber the brother's were confused as to why Eskel tumbled backward's as he rolled into a shadowed corner.

Wysteria waited for him to come back but he had not, Wysteria then followed to where his brother rolled into as he had went literally into the shadow and appeared into a strange realm that had many door's and clock's and book's and a what almost resembled a bird bath he saw his brother eskel staring at it all in wonder as they tried a door that lead to a dream of a human's as it was happy and cheerful the two smiled and shut the door as they tried another as it was yet another happy one but as eskel stepped into it the dream became dark and disturbed as it brought out the dreamer's worste fear as the dream became a nightmare.

Eskel frightend and guilt felt ran out and shut the door tight to unsee what he did. Heart broken he wept as his brother comforted him, The two decided to stay and learn in the dream realm, Year's pass as the brother's grew and learned from a book they read that they are Dream Keeper's or Dream Butler's, Wysteria Was the one Of Good Dream's or dream's in general as Eskel was the Butler of Nightmare's He'd handle bringing nightmare's to tainted soul's to teach a leasson to, aftef they would be done they'd pluck the dream from the dreamer's mind's and save them, and give a new one to the dreamer.

Though as more time passed Eskel had grown tired of being feared he snuck off for a while to explore a dream room of someone named "Asgore" He went inside and saw the king's nightmare though instead of feeling no pity, He had felt some for him, He looked around the dream version of the underground and saw it from a window view he was amazed to see a civilization living below the ground he explored it's wonder and it's citizen's but his focus would be drawn back to the king's each night when Wysteria wasnt paying attention Eskel would sneak off into Asgore's dream room and kept the king companey but from a distance for he knew if he touched the king a nightmare would form.

One night Eskel begged his brother if he could stay in the waking world to serve the king and to see the waking world more, Wysteria refused with worry in his eye's, Eskel pleaded and tried convincing him, Wysteria had seen the desperetness in his brother's gaze finally gave in, He took the Nightmare power's away from Eskel and placed them within himself, he embraced his brother one last time for now as he let his brother head on to find his own destiney, Wysteria now alone in his realm handling both nightmare's and dream's but he knew he would see his brother each night in each dream and knowing his brother is happy is enough to make him feel glee aswell, though he two has someone in his mind he had visted in a dream once but as a child he ment a young flame monster named grillby alone in his dream room couriouse he greeted the flame as grillby greeted back the two got to know eachother more but as time passed to now he wouldnt see grillby's dream door often anymore so he'd do his job but wonder when he'd see his friend again.

(I'll accept any critique/review/suggestion if i need to edit anything feel free to leave a critique and or suggestion below in the comment's :3)

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