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Brokhoist (Brook) The NightKin Sheep Sonic Oc by MadameButler (critique requested)

Brokhoist (Brook) The NightKin Sheep Sonic Oc (critique requested)

MadameButler

First Name: Brokhoist (Brook For Short)

Last Name: Nocturn

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Orientation: Gay

Personality: Very Flamboyent,Sadistic,Balanced Temperd,Flirty ( just to be a little sht XD),Cocky. (Mite add more)

Specie's: Nightkin Sheep

Nationality: Scottish (or British or French)

Occupation: Black Market Killer Butler

Weapon's: Chainsaw,Tranquizer Syringe,A Hatchet.

Abylitie's: Shadow (or Dark Elemental) Manipulation and Nightmare manipulation,Voice Mimic,Night Sight.

Weakness: Light Elemental attack's,Holy infused or marked weapon's and item's.

Flaw's: His cocky and flamboyent personality can get the best of him and sometime's distract him.

Like's: Serving his master,killing his victim's/Target's in creative way's,Baking,cooking,Tea,Hunting. (Mite tweak or add more)

Dislike's: His master being hurt,His prey getting away.

Backstory: Brokhoist or Brook for short was orphaned at the age of 15 he didn't know his parent's, He would steal,trick,scam, Violently mugg on goer's, at the age of 19 he ran into a nobleman who was walking by and asked the wealthy gentleman if he'd wish to play a game, the noble man thought of it and,refused, but Brook would be persistant and use his flirty personality to his advantage to help, the nobleman a bit flustered but annoyed agree'd just to get Brook to leave him alone.

Brook smirked and walked over to a table with the Noble, The noble placed down 20 gold piece's/coin's, as Brook took a pebble and placed it under a cup and shuffled them, if the noble got each choice correct he'd win his gold, but if Brook won he'd get the gold and Brook knew he would one way or the other.

As Brook shuffled the cup's he would sneakly use his Shadow manipulation to hide the pebble in the cup's shadow, as the noble lift all 3 in each round, the pebble wouldn't be there, Brook had cheatedly won and as Brook took the gold and Brook Made his leave quick.

The next morning Brook saw another noble but one who seemed different in a way, Brook asked this noble to a game , the noble refused of course but yet again Brook being persistant and use's his flirt charm won the noble over but he wasnt annoyed he was more amused , Brook confused but shrugged it and sat down with the amused Noble, The noble placed down 100 gold, Brook surprised and determined to win, Yet again he pulled the same trick, but this time at the last round the noble quickly grabbed one of Brook's hand's and lifted up the cup as he saw the pebble sink in it's shadow, Amused more as a smirk grew on the Noble's face, As a look of anxiouseness grew apon Brook's.

With a chuckle the noble said " Hmhm my my what a trickster nightkin you are heheh~" Brook looked up at the noble and replied "How did you-?" But was cut off by the noble as he said "How did i know, hmhm well my trickster friend i've read book's about you're kind how you can use shadow's and such it's..interesting~ also i know you're specie's has a trickster side to them~ plus you're lengthend tail and marking's aren't hard to familierize".

Brook with a sigh and a smirk replied "let me guess you're gonna turn me into the authoritie's hm?~" the noble chuckles softly and replied "Maybe..or how would you like to work for me as a butler but a specific butler you'll have a roof over you're head and warm meal's, i could use you're trickster talent's to good or well grim use, my name is Earl Faustus Lycan i run a secretive black market buisness that sell's special item's though the job is messy and i was wondering if you'de like to join as a butler of death~".

Brook looked up and smirked and shook Faustus's hand agreeing to the deal and replied "Im Brokhoist but you can call me Brook for short darling~" he said with a chuckle, from then on and after training Brook became a Black market killer butler dealing with guest's and target's for his master.

(I'll accept any critique/suggestion's to improve him feel free to leave a critique and or suggestion in the comment's below :3)

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