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Edgar Twilight Raven Harpy Oc by MadameButler (critique requested)

Edgar Twilight Raven Harpy Oc (critique requested)

MadameButler

First Name: Edgar

Last Name: Twilight

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Specie's: Raven Harpy

Orientation: Pansexual

Personality: Cocky,Sadistic when he hunt's and kill's,Couriouse about new thing's,Balanced tempered (will update)

Hunting weapon's: Bow and arrow's and dagger's

Power's: Ice And Dark Elemental Related,Music Related

Weakness: Fire And Pure Light Element's And Normal Weapon's

Occupation: Hunter,Assasine,Theif

Like's: Handling his contract kill's,hunting, theiving, singing and music in general,honey comb's and honey flavored treat's,fish,mice,flying, his adopted mother Nina and his Love Grayson (Both Grayson and Nina Belong to :iconashe-the-fallen:) playing trick's,insect's(Mite add more)

Dislike's: Cat's,Bird hunter's

Backstory: Edgar was born in a land/realm called Wysteria at a young age as a hatchling he fell from his nest and into a bush that broke his fall, his mother and sibling's had no awareness of his abbscence.

Edgar tried calling out to them but his crie's could not reach them, tired he rested in the bush until a woman by the name of Nina heard him on her travle's, she stopped and investigated the little raven's crie's, she knelt down to him and and said " you poor thing why are you down here solitarily / Alone, Little edgar peeped and looked down in sadness, As nina gently reached her hand to him and pet his small fluffed head, Edgar backed away uneased since as nina in a soft gentle tone said " shh..shh it's ok i mean no harm little one." Edgar scencing trust and truthfullness in her word's walked up to her slowly as nina picked him up gently and said "it's ok i will take care of you and raise as my own " she gave edgar a gentle, calming smile as edgar had peeped to her.

Year's passed as Edgar was at the age of 19 he took up a personal job as a hunter to gather food for him and his adopted mother
Through year's of his growing his mother did teach him the way's of how harpie's like him hunt and fly by reading a book on harpie's and other bird's of prey, with all that taught he put it alm to a hunting occupation so him and his mother could eat.

Though money was harsh and rare in wysteria hunted animal's did not earn alot. Since money in wysteria was rare aswell these were poor time's for the land, Edgar wanting to help his mother out more so she could afford what she needed, Decided to seek out a job but one problem he was a harpy not human who would hire a creature that other human's thought harpie's as sinister being's, this pondered his mind indeed.

On his travle's through the nearby wood's he stumbled apon a opening for assasine's creature's welcomed aswell, This intrested him indeed and thought it could pay alot, during nightfall when his mother was asleep he read the paper with the job opening advertised on it, He read the instruction's on how to find the place where the assasine's den is held at, he reached the place as he was greeted by the head of the assasine's, he took the job and started his work.

Day by day with each kill he earned alot of gold. One day he was sent to hunt down a sailor who set sailed to the ocean, Edgar followed the target but a mysteriouse storm came about as a whirl pool formed and glowed the sailor escaped but edgar got caught in the wind's and gor sucked in. He woke up in another world another realm of a different and future like timeline , Where a human by the name of grayson found him in a tree, Grayson saw the harpy and was startled but yet in wonder of this creature that was there infrong of him , he offered edgar help as Edgar was cautiouse as he stayed put in the tree.

Grayson now wondering why this being was not saying a word, could he not know english he thought or was he not the talkative type, Grayson shrugged and walked back inside, he left food out for Edgar hoping it would lure him out so he could help the raven, He made a trail of fish cracker's to his home as Edgar giving into his instinct's followed the trail by eating each cracker, Edgar saw Grayson in front of him and hissed with unease, Grayson startled indeed but knelt down and held out his hand and said in calm tone's "It's ok..im not here to harm you..it's ok." Edgar calmed down as the tone reminded him of his mother as he scenced the same trust and truthfullness in grayson's word's.

Since then Edgar wondering still how he ended up in grayson's world tried to find way's to get back knowing his mother is worried for him, But at the same time tried to adapt to this world that he was in now as he took up an occupation of dealing in malevilent soul's he saw as in lore harpie's delt with people with bad soul's and such and with the help of grayson who over time shared a bond with and even something even more. (Will edit if edit needed)

(I'll accept any critique/suggestion's for any editing feel free to leave you're critique in the comment's below :3)

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