I kinda like this, for the whole internal monologue idea. ... it reminds me I need to do more of my own internal narrative comics except I think I've long lost/forgotten the scripts, yay.
Sit down for a while to compare your motivations to your actual behaviors for insight. Take your time prototyping so you can get used to composing comics naturally. I gave up on art, so I cant say what makes a good comic.
Link
Tayruu
I kinda like this, for the whole internal monologue idea. ... it reminds me I need to do more of my own internal narrative comics except I think I've long lost/forgotten the scripts, yay.