Lumi as a shopkeeper! This is going to be used on my commissions page https://fxsql.com/commissions.php as well as my patreon https://www.patreon.com/Lumi
If you are interested in my commissions keep in mind that I will not be opening again until October, so if you are interested please follow my twitter https://twitter.com/fxsql to stay updated and save up your money!!!
For her outfit I went with a mix of medieval and modern style and came up with the outfit you see in the drawing.
I'm proud of this one
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Naoki
Critique is difficult to suggest.
It seems alright to me as it is.
On a longer term, just keep working, and become more comfortable with yourself!