Jasper Obadiah Flynn by LABINNAK (critique requested)

Jasper Obadiah Flynn (critique requested)

LABINNAK

22 January 2014 at 11:59:41 MST

THE MOMENT YOU ALL BEEN WAITING FOR.... drum roll

... The new comic's Main Character! Jasper!
Obviously, This comic is going to be a steampunk/vintage style novel, but I'm not revealing the story just yet, I'll let you guys guess ;D
But I can give you all a few facts about Jasper, to help you better understand his personality.

Jasper O. Flynn is the son of Thomas and Catherine Flynn; a wealthy/well known family who specializes in mechanical recreations of lost limbs and/or machines to help production in factories, etc. They are known for being the best at what they do.

Enjoy! Let me know what you think!