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-Vulcan Automata: Awake- Chapter II - by KylerKitpup (critique requested)

-Vulcan Automata: Awake- Chapter II - (critique requested)

KylerKitpup

I had a hard time writing this chapter because I didn't want it to be too dark, but yeah it's a bit dark. The fun light hearted part of the story is coming, but certain things need to be established. Would love feedback as I'm really trying to improve my writing method.

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