A Matter of Heft by Kindar (critique requested)

A Matter of Heft (critique requested)

Kindar

28 September 2016 at 10:12:27 MDT

This is a 50$ Short Story commissioned by http://www.furaffinity.net/user/bentproplrprod/

He wanted a weight gain story with some of the characters from his 'Wonderful' Comic, but he let me come up with the victim.

So we have Jeffrey, a weight loss product salesman who ends up going to the wrong place for help when he has car problems.

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