Off The Beaten Path - PREVIEW by Jaxedge (critique requested)

Off The Beaten Path - PREVIEW (critique requested)

Jaxedge

26 November 2014 at 09:07:37 MST

It's been far far FAR too long since I last wrote something and I decided last week to change that. This is still a work in progress but I wanted to get some feedback on how things were coming along.

After getting lost on a walk, Drew stumbles upon a lake that was giving off an unusual smell. Since he'd already spent a lot of time stumbling around, he decided to investigate only to find an unexpected source.

Characters and Story (c) Jaxedge

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