I finally read your comic. The art is stellar. I only had a few issues:
-a few times the reader flow was a bit confusing. It took me as while to realize the comic was read from right to left.
-I had some trouble with a few speech bubbles. It felt like you were changing the way you depicted speech and thoughts. Sometimes the speech bubbles led to the character who was speaking, and sometimes they didn't. It made it a bit more tricky for me to understand what was said
In general, it seems like a very promising comic, and I'm intrigued where it'll go. You're a very talented artist.
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I finally read your comic. The art is stellar. I only had a few issues:
-a few times the reader flow was a bit confusing. It took me as while to realize the comic was read from right to left.
-I had some trouble with a few speech bubbles. It felt like you were changing the way you depicted speech and thoughts. Sometimes the speech bubbles led to the character who was speaking, and sometimes they didn't. It made it a bit more tricky for me to understand what was said
In general, it seems like a very promising comic, and I'm intrigued where it'll go. You're a very talented artist.