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One superpup coming up! (pt. 2) by How2101 (critique requested)

One superpup coming up! (pt. 2) (critique requested)

How2101

Fully suited up, our new Nibbles is ready to rumble! With his new superpowers, he's ready to take on the scum and villainy of the earth!


... well, ALMOST ready.


See, as great and powerful as our canine crusader is, even the mightiest heros can't do it all by themselves. They need assistants to wash, clean, and do all the dirty, menial work your shiny savior is too busy to perform, as well as city clean-up after fights where city blocks become unfortunate collateral, evacuating citizens from said city blocks before their inevitable destruction, and chasing down the petty thivery and mischief that's beneath our bold, noble hero to solve. After all, Nibbles can't be ready to save the city when he's chasing down every insignificant little shoplifter and jaywalker!


So, my fair, hapless citizen, help your hero out by signing up to become one of Nibble's heroic superpets assistants today!


You'll be bestowed the greatest honor in our fair city, of caring for our beloved protector's every need! It may seem grueling, tiresome, or, as some have shamefully accused us of, "a blatant violation of labor laws" being made to perform hard, repetitive manual tasks twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week, but it's for a noble cause - and our patented, totally-not-brainwashing Nibble-specs will soon fill you with a "heroic vigor" worthy of the crusading canine himself! You'll love your assigned duties so much, you'll never want to stop!


And the super-neat part is: with our super-special superpet suits, you don't have to!


once they're on, there's no more need for things that get in the way of good, productive work, such as sleeping, eating, free will, or bathroom breaks.


The best, most obedient superpets may even get the honor of fighting alongside Nibbles himself, working together to turn reduce villain into another mindless superpet copy.


Get the chance - and the privliege - of a lifetime. Sign up now to become one of Nibble's loyal superpets today!



Nibbles-themed sequel commission for readyunknownfox - or rather, Nibbles the superdog, recruiting some new members under his wing!



part 1: One Superpup coming up! (pt.1) by How2101 -- Fur Affinity [dot] net