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there is a little village
a painting for myself u//u if theres any advice on how to make this better i would like to know
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lskdjowa thank you X D<3
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Oh my! Little spirit bunnies? This is so cute. And the lighting is great too.
I think it looks great as is. But to make it better? Well, that depends on your definition of better. I like the loose yet refined feeling this has, but to be picky, the shingles on the roof could maybe be a little more defined, and maybe a bit more bark detail with varying light saturation because angles and stuff. The small middle window seems to have too much shadow around it since it has light shining from within.
But those are just small things, the overall effect is very nice.
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ahh thank you so much! .//w. i'll use this for future reference for further artwork I really appreciate it! .//w.
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I may struggle with my own style and am too lazy for backgrounds, but I've studied art for years, even for college level stuff. I don't know everything, that's for darn sure, so maybe there are other things others could pick out. But yes. I enjoy offering any bit of valid insight I have when someone asks openly.
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Also, experiment with cropping the lower foreground part out, the shadowy bit in front, it distracts the eye a bit. Extra foreground elements can clutter an image and aren't always necessary.
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okaaay
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I think this is beautiful as fuck.
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Snarkclaw
I like the mood lighting on this.