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Digimon Freelancer Adventure - The Core by foxgamer01 (critique requested)

Digimon Freelancer Adventure - The Core (critique requested)

foxgamer01

Commissioned for Aleph!
Art in thumbnail by Chicostyx
Alephmon and Stry belong to Aleph
Kuromon and Ember belong to Kuro
Nekozukimon belongs to Leo_Nekozuki
Stormymon belongs to StormyWolf295
Castmon belongs to CastawayCollie
Toximon belongs to ToxinChinchilla
Fauxmon belongs to Chicostyx
Aonikmon belongs to Aonik

The day was typical for everyone in the Digimon Freelancer's castle. Kajimon was testing his elixirs with Alephmon, Nekozukimon was training with Leomon, Kuromon was doing blacksmithing work with Ember, and more. Everything went on peacefully.

Until the Core underneath the Old Throne started to meltdown.

Ooooooh, boy. This story was a pain in a half to finish. Part of that was because this story grew longer than I expected, and then I suffered from a nasty cold after I did the rough draft. It took a couple of weeks until I got over it for the most part.

Hopefully, I'll catch up by doing a couple of shorter stories. Maybe.

Say, didn't I say that I want to do shorter stories? XD;

Enjoy, and take it easy out there!

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