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A HailFire Change 2: Meeting the Mentor by foxgamer01 (critique requested)
A few days passed since Thomas transformed into Thermis Coldflare, a four-armed, two-headed Ninetalestaur. Since then, odd things happened to their friend, Lloyd, that only he noticed. At least until the group discovered Thermis's car had changed somehow. N̶o̵w̵,̴ ̸T̶h̸e̷r̶m̵i̴s̶ ̷s̸e̷a̷r̶c̵h̷e̸d̸ ̵f̶o̸r̷ ̶t̶h̴e̵ ̶m̶y̶s̴t̶e̴r̸i̷o̸u̸s̵ m̴͍̾a̶̬͊s̵̰̋t̸̥̂e̷͎̽ṟ̶͂m̵̜̊i̴͕͛n̴̬̅ď̶̘ ̴̹́b̴̬̿e̸̮̊h̵͎̕i̷̋͜n̶̰̐d̵̛̥ ̸͓͂ţ̵̄h̴̝́e̵͎̐ c̷̹̊a̴̟̬̔͝m̵̻̉p̴͔̓͐i̵̞̔̐n̸͙͈̈́g̴̦͑ ̵͉̔͝t̵͎͊r̴̜̄͆i̷̱͗̈́p̴̹̻̽̎'̶̛̭̱̋s̸̨͇̄̈́ ̶̘͑͌e̸̟̘͐v̶͖͛é̴̡̼n̶͖̈́t̶̪͚̆́s̷̟̀̚.̷̦̿ Ẃ̵̯̗̯̑̎̓͜͝ḩ̴͕̔̍̓̉a̸̳̙͗́̆͑̍ẗ̴̛̝͕͙̜́̄͘ ̵̘̺̯͉̳̍̿̌̓̚w̵̧̜̟̭͂̔͆̚͝ĭ̴͚̬̰͐͠͠l̷̨͔̞̖̽̿͂̕l̵͍͙̱͂̉̚ ̷̢̤̲̇ḫ̸̩̟̲̄a̴̬̕p̸̖̞̉́̔͆p̴͚̯̹̾͋͊̽͝e̷̺̥̪̞̐̚n̷͍͓̊͝
It's my story now.
Your worst enemy could be your best friend
And your best friend your worst enemy
Much like last time, this story is a commissioned one in exchange for a Shiny Pokémon. He wished to be anonymous. However, he does have one statement that he wishes to share.
"Anyone who wants to draw fan art of this series has my permission; no need to ask permission. Just please share it with us if you do, is all we ask."
Enjoy, and take it easy out there!
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