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Alephmon's Grand Adventure by foxgamer01 (critique requested)

Alephmon's Grand Adventure (critique requested)

foxgamer01

Commissioned by Aleph
Alephmon and Stry belong to Aleph!
Kuromon and Ember belong to Kuro!
Nekozukimon belongs to https://twitter.com/Leo_Nekozuki
Stormymon belongs to https://twitter.com/StormyWolf295


Alephmon, Stry, Kuromon, and Ember traveled to a mountain to acquire as much Chrome Digizoid as possible in its mines. When they got there, they discovered a temple within the mine that lay a curse upon them. They got three extra chances if they fell into a trap, but if they got flattened for the fourth time, they would be stuck that way forever. Who built such a place within a mine, and would our heroes be able to acquire the Chrome Digizoid and escape?


Whew. This is one of those stories that grew a lot longer than expected. Writing this story is a lot of fun, even with stuff that interrupts it.

I hope that you all enjoy it and take it easy.


MilkSnoot did the art in the thumbnail!

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