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Why by foxgamer01 (critique requested)

Why do I have a heart

If all I do is hurt people with it?

Why do I have a soul

If all I do is don't care about it?

Why do I have a hand

If all I do is backstab with it?

Why do I have a foot

If all I do is kick people with it?

Why do I have a game

If all I do is ruin it?

Why do I have a life

If all I do is ruin others with it?

Why do I have a mind

If all I do is nothing with it?

Why do I have a eye

If all I do is glare with it?

Why do I have a mouth

If all I do is spit with it?

Why do I have friendship

If all I do is hurt it?

Why (critique requested)

foxgamer01

Why why why?

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    I feel like I am missing a greater piece of context here ;-;

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      Been feeling like I've been abusing my friends. I even hurt one of them. ;.|.;

      I feel so miserable now.

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        D: I'm sorry. I don't know what to tell you ._. *random-person hug*

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        You can always change. Maybe you've built it up in your head to seem worse and things are still ok. But like I said you can still change. If you felt no remorse that would be worse wouldn't it? Some people are all those things and don't feel anything. Some even feel justified in hurting others. Admitting any fault is the first step to changing yourself. As the Buddhists say - you can't change the outside world but you have control of yourself and how you act and think. Nam Myoho Renge Kyo (lotus sutra)