my first two thoughts:

jax looks really good in those colors

and they look like they're clubbing at a rave

whoops!

Anyway another one where it felt like cheating but: volume zero of their story IS up, there are hints of this, it'll be more blatent as story goes on, and....... why not

I really like the composition of this piece but Jax is maybe a little too tall... i always struggle with heights...