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''I won't burn long....'' by FlowersSoul (critique requested)

''I won't burn long....'' (critique requested)

FlowersSoul

"...and evidence of your done wrong will be gone, in seconds I swear "

yea
i found a file of my old, unfinished "in fact" video, and decided to redo one frame, just for the hell of it...
aND THEN, HALF WAY THROUGH I REALIZED I ALREADY REDID THIS ONE I S2G

2011: fav.me/d4i1mmx
2012: fav.me/d52r2p3

critique is very welcome uwo

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    You're character looks amazing! The only thing that seems improvable is your background, the fire lacks some blending, and the grass blades seem a bit thicker than they should be. Lastly, all i see behind your fire is black, and there should be at least some hint of what's on the other side (not much, but a slight inclination of shapes. While it's harder to see on the other side of a fire at night, you can still see, though anything close to the other side would be as visible as that on this side).

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      ahh ok i see! thank you so much for helping me out, i'll keep all this in mind for my future drawings~! <3