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Ioddny 3: headshot by Flops (critique requested)

Ioddny 3: headshot (critique requested)

Flops

Just a doodle of my new 'sona thing.
I've never had a dog one before 0:

spent about two hours on this one.
I hope you enjoy!

@critiques: This is my first time asking for a critique so some productive critiquing please? I'm a bit of a sissy still

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    Two hour... Doodle? XD

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      well more like an hour and a half but yeah :<

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    DOODLE?! Holy crap man XD If I'd make doodles like that and in a couple of hours... Just... Like..... WOW. Seriously. :'D
    This is amazing~ and Imma steal that muzzle o3o It looks so great~ (all of it!)

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    I really love the texturing in this, especially the furry cheeks and the body, it still gives the impression of fur without being fuzzy-all-over-the-place like how some artists do (aka me). The hair is well defined and interesting to look at, but if you were going for more "realism" I would have a few wispy stands out of place (I usually just do thin, single strokes for out of place hairs). The shadow placement and reflective parts are gorgeous and fun to look at. Realistically, dog noses are porous so the light would be a bit less hard (more like light on skin than light on tooth or eye surface) but I like how it looks.

    This is just general criticism since I'm not sure exactly what you were hoping to improve on. That being said

    THIS IS SO PRECIOUS AND I LOVE IT AAAA LOOK AT HER FUZZY SPANIEL EARS<3

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      haha thank you very much! :>
      spaniels are my favortieee ;3;

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    you did a great job on the hair!! oUo
    My only question/critique is the black dots on the muzzle. Were you marking where the whiskers were or are those markings?
    If they're not markings I'd make them tinier and closer together C:
    but besides that everything is really well done, like usual!