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thanks, when i first read about cuckoos when i was a kid it made me really upset. Several days ago the idea for this came to me during a walk in the woods. Kind of odd to think of a bird as a parasite, but a cuckoo fits the bill nicely doesn't it
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It is an interesting thought, to call a bird a parasite... and it has me thinking of some small bird landing on someone's head, then staying there until they become one, the bird slowly possessing the mind of the person... Hmm
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Nice piece here! I like the tie-in with the fox; really helps convey the circularity of nature.
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thank you,
yes i did want to make a point of that.
Also it is more noticeable on the version i posted on fa, the brown text resembles an egg (the transition to a P.D.F sort of destroyed it :/) .
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I finally read this and it is /really/ good
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thanks i got the idea during a walk in the woods this last winter. It was eerily silent that day. It was sunny yet frigid with a slight breeze that rattled the dead sea-reeds that line the Carmanas river. My mother and i passed by a tree and a bird suddenly called out as we passed by and i swear it sounded like the poor sucker was crying. Next thing i know i start thinking about cuckoos, rest is history XD
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