This is my first go at a creepypasta. Please critique, as I had fun writing this and would like to know if there's anything I'd need to improve on if I continue writing in this genre :)
This is very nicely and I liked how the concept was used was in this
One issue I found was the mentioning of creepypastas, but that may be me linking that to not-so-good stories with over powered characters
The pacing could be a little better, it went to nice little app to death and darkness. Those two are really the only issues I saw.
Chances are I will be looking into your other stories since Planet Nakti seems interesting
I was trying to go for a more meta approach towards creepypastas but I can see where it could be jarring. Pacing will have to be another thing I'm aware of for my future stories. I sometimes find myself rushing into things a bit too quickly than I'd like to.
And I'm looking forward to what you think of the Planet Nakti stories as well :3 thanks for the critique
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Kai
I used to work in a toy store, and they had interactive stuffed animals of Angela and Tom. I always found them creepy for some reason...