Sign In

Close
Forgot your password? No account yet?

Failure by Danji-Isthmus (critique requested)

Failure (critique requested)

Danji-Isthmus

Made this for a youtube vid, that was corrupted half way through -SIGH-

Oh well. I love drawing monsters so it's okay.

Even wrote up a tiny scenario to go with it. Enjoy!

Feel free to critique my writing... I'm slowly easing myself back into it I guess.


“Help me.” It screamed in a desperate, gargled roar. The red unidentifiable flesh that dripped from the mangled skeleton smelled more of waste than meat. Every thrash of it’s body sent ropes of it around in disgusting spatters. The anguished cries did nothing to sway the onlookers; a sea of cold eyes that only blinked away to jot down a few notes.

A disturbed newcomer turned to his senior, confused and looking for answers. “Why do they allow him to live?” He looked pained as the creature let out another pitiful cry, each one becoming less human and more frightening as time passed.

The elder man simply turned his apprentice so he was looking at the dripping monstrosity. “To progress, we must understand and face our failures.” His grip on the apprentice’s shoulder became uncomfortably tight, beads of sweat noticeably forming on his upper lip. “A failure often presents us with fascinating results.”

“But…” The senior shushed the apprentice, who slammed down his clipboard and ran out of the room. Unable to face what they had done.

Submission Information

Views:
221
Comments:
0
Favorites:
4
Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital