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Firecrest; page 01/51.
Quite a lot of details in this first page.
This is a personal project, will be entirely free, and will take me a long time to complete. So i appreciate any support if you can help.
(And you'll find WIPs, High Resolution and even the entire script)
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What you mean?
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Looking at it again, I feel like it might just be that his speech bubbles around reaching out of panel and being on the before last one.
I do understand that it'd be difficult to set up, but if it were up to me, I'd put the "Forbid-Excuse me" a panel before, where we got the big panning shot of the room, it being directed down, to where the reader understands that someone has just entered.
Still, this is just a personal opinion about a rather small detail. It's a really well made comic :)
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Farel
Really well setup first page. I feel a bit concerned about how the second character is depicted, as it took me a little bit to get the idea that these are 2 characters, but overall , it's a really fine job