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The Mind Ethereal by Clove Darkwave
The Mind Ethereal
What once was clarity
Now lost to me
Clouds
Wandering o'er misty moors of mine
Thoughts all lost to time
The mind ethereal
The idea behind this poem came to me while I was at work early in the morning, my mind still in a sleepy haze. I had a mental image of stumbling through a misty landscape while my mortal shell behind just continued along with the routine. It's short and hopefully evoking, and served well to clear the thoughts.
All the same, it was a good mental stretch after not writing anything other than Shadowrun plots and villains for quite a long time.
Good grief I still can't submit straight from OpenOffice. How frustrating.
Thanks to my lovely other half for her suggestions and revision.
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That's what I was hoping to convey, so if it made you think of that I consider it a success.
I will endeavor to continue to entertain!
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Toshabi
I wander off into my mind quite often, especially over the past few days. Sometimes, it just feels like you've been ripped straight out of your body to dwell amongst the imagery your mind puts you in.
I like the mood of this poem. I hope to read more of your writings whether they be of poems of character back story.