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Will I Ever Be Enough by Chevy (critique requested)

Will I Ever Be Enough (critique requested)

Chevy

But I am only so much

I would love to give up

You have picked me to the bone

I am only so much

And nothing much is left of me

You take more, more, more,

Till I'm gone

Till I'm good to no one

I open my heart

You tear me apart

And I cannot stop you.

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    I think this piece has impact, I like the blood trailing down, the snow/specks/stars in the background the highlight it. The lines, in it's sketchy-ness, make the feeling of it come together. It does seem to be a rough draft of something amazing, although it is still quite good.

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    Very powerful, filled with much emotion. Art doesn't have much of that nowadays (yeah I'm an old fart in the furry community, relatively anyway I guess if you consider 30 old), but I just love pieces that bring forth such feelings to the viewer as this one did to me. Plus the artistic tact at capturing such a feeling is phenomenal. Very powerful.