Project ALSATIAN (Section Two) by Certified_GSD (critique requested)

Project ALSATIAN (Section Two) (critique requested)

Certified_GSD

31 March 2014 at 15:26:04 MDT

A story of mine I'm writing/typing, putting it out because eventually I need to.

About: Second chapter, focusing a bit more on the "environment" and a bit on the "friends" of the MC.

I'd appreciate any kind of constructive criticism, but razing comments are not appreciated.

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