Project ALSATIAN (Section One) by Certified_GSD (critique requested)

Project ALSATIAN (Section One) (critique requested)

Certified_GSD

31 March 2014 at 15:21:28 MDT

A story of mine I'm writing/typing, putting it out because eventually I need to.

About: This is just an introductory chapter, and will not actually have any kind of introduction to the main synopsis until later.

I'd appreciate any kind of constructive criticism, but razing comments are not appreciated.

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