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This took a lonnnng time! And a lotta washes. And I'm pretty sure the watercolour paper started peeling up? Oh well.
Media: Watercolour, sakura coloured inking pens, White ink.
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Anything, really.
If people have any advice or nitpicks that can help me improve on my next drawing, than I'm eager for them.
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Well, I guess it looks kinda rigid. I'm not sure how, but I suggest trying to make edges rounder, or more balanced. That, and some of the perspective, makes the pillars look a bit off.
But while I can see these flaws, I wanna emphasize thay I wouldn't know how to fix them. I think you are generally more skilled than I currently am.
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Thank you! I can definitely see what you mean, and I'll try and take that into account. Even if you don't solutions to the problem, comments like this help me get a generally idea of areas to think more about and work on, so it can still be very helpful.
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Ohhhhhh I cannot stand when the watercolor paper starts peeling apart. Have you tried using illustration board?
Materials aside, I'm absolutely in love with this piece <3 You put a lot into this, and it's beautifully evident in this piece <3 I adore how you rendered the eyes, and the stonework is top notch!
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Alyx the furvid
What kind of critique are you hoping for? I can only think of a few nitpicks.