7 October 2019 at 11:06:40 MDT
on 7 October 2019 at 17:36:30 MDT
The first thing that stood out to me is the colors. The shading is soft yet shows folds in cloths with no problem. The hair highlight having a gradient is also a great way to guide the eye to the face.
The sketch/linework is wonderfully done. The softer color mixed with the pops of the dark colors from the hair and clothing acts as a great eye guide. The top of the left wing is oddly not lined along with the left glove, which is likely just a detailed missed. Happens to everyone at some point. What does stand out is one of the hair highlights. It's close enough to the shirt while being a similar color, causing it to blend. The best way to spot those is the mirror the art if possible or back away/or zoom out.
The color filling is a bit inconsistent, and that's completely fine with the sketchy look, but some parts of it stand out in a bad way. One being that one of the hair strands are suddenly thicker and round rather than tapering off to a tip. There's some smaller ones partially exemplified by contrast of the colors (Primarily the top of the right wing and the left sock), but those don't caused any problems
Hopefully this helps!
on 7 October 2019 at 21:01:53 MDT
yes it helps. Ty ^^~