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My part on a trade with NizhoniWolf.
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Thank you very much for the critique, I really appreciate it.
I tried to make the foreground more stylized as the painted version is meant to look like a colorful fantasy, since the paint covers most the lineart details I decided to keep it simpler and easier for the eye to catch.
The idea of the lines behind the mountain were to look like clouds, but now that you said, I admit that they look quite vague, I could've used some shading to make it stand out more.
About the right hand, I guess you are right too, it could be a little larger, I'll definitely pay more attention, being it one of my biggest struggle points.
Thanks again for taking the time to write this, you definitely got me thinking. I'll be releasing the painted version soon, feel free to take a look, I would love your opinion.
Best regards.
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This looks great!
I actually love the level of detail you put in this.
Anyway, you flagged this for critique, so I'll try find something in this, which is not great (or perfect) like the rest.
I think the right hand is a bit too small. I might be wrong here easily, but is does not look wide enough.
The trees on the left look stylized, like a reduction, while the rest very realistic. Maybe there are trees like this, or this is an interesting design choice.
Similar is the cane, the lines feel quite deep.
I can't quite figure out what behind the mountain is… Are those clouds? Or even higher mountains with an forest on them?
That's everything even slightly negative I could say.
Hope I haven't wasted your time with this ^!!^