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Long Walks on Beaches by Antumbra (critique requested)

Long Walks on Beaches (critique requested)

Antumbra

This is Myra and she wanted to show you her tattoos while she is out having some fun in the sun.

She is technically a secondary character, but she works with the main group of people. She is a telepath and is essentially one of the two "radios" for the group, sitting back at HQ relaying info. She has no other useful skills besides looking good in a bikini, so she doesn't work in the field.

Comments and critiques are always welcome and much appreciated!

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    Wow, your shading is amazing. The only thing that takes away from it is the lack of detail in the background.. while I understand it would be blurred in a photo, I don't believe it'd be that out of focus.

    You did an amazing job on the focal point, the only thing I'd consider suggesting would be to make your lines more uniform, and to work on backgrounds a bit more.

    The only thing I saw that might be a mistake would be on her forward-most leg.. near the bottom of the image. I think you'll see what I mean when you get to looking at the lineart.

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      Thank you very much! I'll definitely try working on those. The bottom of the leg is definitely a mistake, I meant to cut that off when trimming the final piece.

      Thank you again!