I... I really got to hand it to myself here. I really like the first half of the chapter. The descriptiveness is just... Wow.
One of my greatest weaknesses as a writer is well, descriptiveness, and this time. I feel as though I may be defeating that weakness. N-not entirely. And I still have plenty more weaknesses that are... awful, but. I am growing as a writer. And that makes me happy.
The second half... Not satisfied, but could be worse. Ah well.

Here is Chapter 11!!
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