(I wonder how many of you will see this when I upload at 1 AM (My time)...)
'kay so since this is the second draft, I obviously have rewritten a few things lately. Well Chapter 3 was one of the ones I thought needed a COMPLETE rehaul. Sure the first part of it is still the same, but the second part is different. I dunno how many chapters will be rewritten for the most part (chapter 5.) but... (Chapter 5 of first draft sucks BALLS.) Yeah. This is a revision after all... (Fuck chapter 5)

Draft One had 1,729 words
Draft Two (this one) has 3,357 words
UP 94.16%

UPDATE. There is a line break on on of the pages. After "Nothing happened". The missing line that is SUPPOSED to be there reads:
'Damn it. Come on Aero. Do what Shade just did.'
He was thinking that in his mind.

I've just noticed something. Seem every time I italicize something, it glitches the format on Weasyl, because something similar happened on Chapter 2.
Well that's just STUPID! >:C
I suppose I need to figure something out now, huh...?