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Are you ready for the Squeakend? by Achiga (critique requested)

Are you ready for the Squeakend? (critique requested)

Achiga

Something I drew in about 6 hours. Was meant to be something small, but came out a lot bigger. I posted another squeaky Goodra yesterday, but felt it wasn't good enough, so I made a new version for all you balloonheads out there <3

Art © achiga
Goodra © The Pokemon Company

Tools used:
-Google Nexus 10, Wacom bamboo stylus for tablets. - first 4 hours
-Photoshop CS2, Intuos4 - Last 2 hours

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    This is pretty nice, I like how you did the transparency. I feel like the head's not quite right though. Based on the seam on the neck, the head is tilted at a slightly different angle because of the position of the eyes and face-seam. (There seams to be a second seam there too, but that could be on the other side transparently showing through, it's hard to tell.)

    In terms of the face though, I feel like it should be tilted to their left (right/away from the viewer) so the nose-seam sorta aligns more with the neck, or that seam had some bends to show the twisting. Obscuring all but the head, the head appears fine.

    This might be something best experimented with to feel right.

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      Thank you for your comment! It's hard to get some good criticism. It has been noted and I'll work on it more in the future! :D

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    What I wouldn't give to own a big balloon like this. I think you did wonderfully on it all <3