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hunger fruit wip? by 2382 (critique requested)

Hunger fruit
Appearance of a hunger fruit is a golden round fruit with a paw print on it growing on a tree all alone any tree can make one
there's been ten know Hunger fruits
A hunger fruits powers can be shared although very rare and equal to how much it's divided
although when one eats part of it they have insatiable urge to eat the rest of it does this is very infrequent
Although most of the food is needed to make a wish message generally advised not to break it up on top of it others may have other taste's
Has a habit of being weird growing no one knows how most likely even in Dimensions
they are scarce but sometimes there might be unique cases and unique variance in most cases there might be only one
in the world but the next world might have 7 of them
although that is very unlikely and very low one might have all ten
Once one is consumed the residence of the planet suffer slightly less penalties for being fatter and feel slightly more hungry
any hunger fruit with another can mix abilities or keep separate so some are good pairs and others are dangerous
each fruit eaten does double the status effects
ex eating 1 hunger fruit is to a small bonus other than ability
but 2 equals a mild bonus
3 a large bonus you get while I'm getting out right
certain fruits do flock more to certain species
the hot one almost always ends up with dragons at least in the beginning

(1)
spicey

  • 5 all states if consumed Ability the more spiced,cooked or willing the is the opponent the weaker they are

short hand note
debuffs opponent

(2)
hot
Can do any number of unique cooking can make a person slowly like being cooked to stop fighting and be food
also allows the user to have flaming breath or dragon's breath for a technical term

(3)
ghostly feeding

(4)
sweet

(6)
Absorb

(5)
sour

(6)liquify
can cause any opponent two becomes complete liquid in 2 minutes
but in the meantime their body slowly becomes liquid and even in liquid form they can still run away
if they have enough will or strength they may be able to pull off of it

(8)
black hole
void of nothings

10 need to gave the abilly to make wish engery Which would allow them to make wishes

af=Artificial fruit Usually made of parts of other fruits Artificial fruit
Most likely will not give wish energy for being weaker or we need a lot more of them putting the same fruit does not Grant any bonus
other than strength of the fruit so 10 spicy foods wouldn't help you much other than strength

af med 1()

af goo ???

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hunger fruit wip? (critique requested)

2382

to make things short I don't know if I'm going to finish I had it is a unique idea I had although I did not think of this in the beginning it is inspired indirectly probably subconsciously by k9manx90 Feast Beast and one piece oddly enough even though there's a lot of voures themes it's not fully the intent At first I thought this would be a good idea to slowly added slide magical reason for that this is work in progress if I do continue it
feel free to leave any ideas for a fruit whether it be artificial or real This is free to use in its current state it always will be so make as many ideas as you want why don't have a character eat one all of my stories are that way unless stated otherwise but do link back to me or give me a link to your story i'd love to read it either way goodbye

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