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childhood pt1 by 2382 (critique requested)

so is this how it really ends
yes and no evaluate what went right and what went wrong and perhaps you could be let go
props you can change
I wasn't always the best wolf of the pact wasn't I
true but get on with it
childhood
I was so innocent back then yet so fearsome
what do you mean
I didn't have the best parents no one's perfect
my father is abusive over aggressive an alcoholic and on top of it a smoker
well that could lead down someone a dark path alone
my mother
was indirectly drugged up by doctors with so many antidepressants
to the point that she became numb she became very dull and being a smoker too
I still care for her but on same side I wish she could do more
yet what's with the small horns so small they look like a female goat
ironic you would say that my mom as messed around with magical forces before my birth a love spell
so I imagine I have a little bit more magic than the normal person
yes go on I never had any friends truly at the end otherthan one really
fat wolf one possible female that's the only friend I had
I've been bullied every year of my life during school
oh really that explains why you're here then
it all takes a toll doesn't it
yes it does
I'm going to guess your downfall you went more down the path of magic being your only friend
you went to some dark alleys did some dark deals
and brought about much death Maybe but this is my story
yes
despite everything I was a pretty good student aside from math
I Ace most subjects and did well
my sanity was tested multiple times
yet I pushed through push through most of it all the crying
in pain and sorrow and the attempts of much darker nature
I see you mean yes
why you taking such a pause
I need a moment to remember to think without going crazy without screaming without getting angry
I believe we have the time but be careful I might get a cat nap
how funny I thought you were a lot bigger than a cat
oh my someone decides to look away from their shoes
pipe it
yes take a moment
breathe in breathe out
I really regret my intelligence what do you mean once you make something new
once it's in the public you can never take it back i see
it started during my childhood years
I began to try to do science experiments
see how the world works then I realized Magic is strong
is a different Force from the normal what would happen
if both benefits could be achieved
what could I make
could I strengthen it make something higher than Magic
if magic is fought of the will
then perhaps if the brain is increased could make a stronger Magic
when I was young I made a slight break through
I made a substance called CCTY that had multiple magical properties that could be programmed
could easily strengthen most materials or stretch them applying to anything
CCTY had goo and its base form appearance and properties
like it could be easily enhanced
it could be easily mass-produced
it's was the first time making something in Magic truly physical it could
be enhanced and enhanced enhanced ironic
but that was the first stage of my mistake
how could it be
for one it gives people that didn't have access to magic
magic think of all the Horrors and one could do with magic
many things
because then they could eat the goo and then gain it
if one was applied specifically the aspect of fire one could always increase it with spare Magic
thus leading to a true stockpile thus leading to a stronger fire spell
and that is just the tip of the iceberg

childhood pt1 (critique requested)

2382

sadly I'm on a time restraint and on top of it I hope you enjoy what I've got so far bye bye please critique but feel free to remix make OCs or do whatever you want to it

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