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The Outsider by Hashire (critique requested)

The Outsider (critique requested)

Hashire

Help me if you can...

its just that this is not the way I'm wired so could you please
help me understand why you've given in to all these reckless dark desires?

You're lying to yourself again, suicidal imbecile...
You're pounding on the fault line.

What would it take to get through to you precious?

Why would I want to watch you disconnect and self-destruct one bullet at a time?

Art and Delasangre belong to me.

"The outsider" is (c) A Perfect Circle

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313
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Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

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  • Link

    I can't think of anything bad in this photo.. what kind of crit were you looking for? It all looks great to me ^,^

    • Link

      Anything in general really. Im always looking to.find things to improve on.

      • Link

        Well, the focal character looks amazing, the only thing I can think is maybe a more complex background.. a night sky with the cliched full moon, or perhaps even just a spot-light like thing shining into the character's face so that it looks like s/he's looking up into the light.

        • Link

          I had thought of that, however because of the feeling I was going for, that would have seemed too peaceful and positive so to speak xD Hes feeling sorrow, and although a light is what he sees, its not a happy or positive light. Hes making a choice whether to persue the hell he sees before him and allow himself to be consumed by it...or to find another way.

          • Link

            Perhaps then a twisted forest background (like one of those that just screams "keep out") with a slightly lighter spot in the direction he's facing (maybe on the edge of the image so that it looks a bit off-track from his current path)? have it night-time with no stars out (maybe make it look clouded)