KaidiLioness's Shouts
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woo hoo!! I'm glad you have a Weasyl as well :3
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THE HECK I FOUND YA OMG ITS MEEH WHITE XENOMORPH
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Don't ever call Elizabeth a Mary-Sue again!!
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I told you I wasn't trying to be mean. The way you've developed her is mary-sue ish. All you need to do is give her a few flaws and then she'll become more of an original character. It's not a 'bad' thing that your character is mary-sue ish, she just needs more work if you want people to see her as more of an original character. =)
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CristalCalluna
Heyheyhey, I've found you! c;