I wanted to wait until I'd gone over it once before I made a public announcement (my previous journal was friends-only), but I am now confident that I do indeed have a workable first draft of "The Linen Butterfly." I am still awaiting first impressions from my first two beta readers who have a lot on their plates, but I am open for at least two more trustworthy readers (preferably someone I know) to give the rough first draft an honest appraisal.

Most of the problems involve typos and stylistic issues that I am aware of and will fix; I just want feedback on the story as it stands.

Better if you can get to reading it ASAP because the quicker I can get feedback the sooner I can polish this into the best work I've ever done.

Any takers?